Audience feedback of first draft

In order to see what to improve in our teaser trailer we asked our target audience some questions about what they liked and what could be improved, and here's what they said...

We have taken this audience feedback into account and her is what we plan to do:

• Cut up the party footage at the beginning to make it look more like a trailer
• Add some background into the clown and characters to make the storyline clearer
• Research into fonts to use
• Add more scary/ gore aspects